Matthew+G

Good progress Matthew.
Try to work on writing more detailed responses. YOu can do this by spending more time discussing the EFFECT of the quotes you use and the techniques you find in those quotes. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing your completed Henry V analysis. APA progress: 1.5 Miss A.

Severn Suzuki
 * Technique || Example || Effect ||
 * Listing || * You don’t know how to fix the holes in our ozone layer.


 * You don’t know how to bring salmon back up a dead stream.
 * You don’t know how to bring back an animal now extinct.
 * And you can’t bring back forests that once grew where there is now desert. || It gives us many reasons and makes us realise what is happening. Gives us more information about what is happening ||
 * Personal Anecdote || Two days ago here in Brazil, we were shocked when we spent some time with some children living on the streets. And this is what one child told us: “I wish I was rich and if I were, I would give all the street children food, clothes, medicine, shelter and love and affection.” || Tells us a story about the talker making it fell like we know more about them and what they know ||
 * introduction || Hello, I’m Severn Suzuki speaking for E.C.O. – The Environmental Children’s Organization. || It starts of to help us know how they are and where there from and what they do and throw the speech what he/she wants to achieve ||
 * Appeal || I am here to speak for the countless animals dying across this planet because they have nowhere left to go. We cannot afford to be not heard || Makes us feel sorry and makes us want to help and change what is making the problem happen ||

How does speech maker Severn Suzuki persuade her audience? Severn Suzuki is a 12 year old girl from Canada how travelled to the earth summit in 1992. Her persuasive techniques were to convince the audience and make them think of what is happening. The first technique she uses is listing “You don’t know how to fix the holes in our ozone layer.


 * You don’t know how to bring salmon back up a dead stream.
 * You don’t know how to bring back an animal now extinct.
 * And you can’t bring back forests that once grew where there is now desert.”



This gives us many reasons of what is happening and how many times this is happening. Next technique is a personal anecdote. Two days ago here in Brazil, we were shocked when we spent some time with some children living on the streets. And this is what one child told us: “I wish I was rich and if I were, I would give all the street children food, clothes, medicine, shelter and love and affection.” This makes us feel like we now more about her and her life which makes us listen more to the speech and makes it more interesting and real life stories of what is happening. Another technique she uses is introduction this is another way for listeners to fell and now more about the talker “Hello, I’m Severn Suzuki speaking for E.C.O. – The Environmental Children’s Organization.” This is also formal and a better approach to more important people and by being that way they would be more kinder and more into the speech. Finally her last technique is appeal “I am here to speak for the countless animals dying across this planet because they have nowhere left to go. We cannot afford to be not heard” this makes us more emotional and fell sorry about what we have done and how we have effect the environment. This is just a couple of techniques that Severn Suzuki uses in here speech.

** Shakespearian text **

I have suckled a baby, and I know how sweet it is to love the baby at my breast. But even as the baby was smiling up at me, I would have plucked my nipple out of its mouth and smashed its brains out against a wall if I had sworn to do that the same way you have sworn to do this. || telling the story of what she would do informing that Macbeth is weak and need to man up because this is what I would do ||
 * Technique || Example || Effect ||
 * personal Anecdote || Now the time and place are just right, but they’re almost too good for you.
 * 1st person plural || we || She is say like do it for me do it for us lets rule and be rich ||
 * 2nd person plural || you || She is talking do someone blaming them this case Macbeth ||
 * Introduction || **LADY MACBETH ** enters. What news do you have? || Shows us what mood lady Macbeth is in and what is she doing ||

How does lady Macbeth convince him: lady Macbeth convinces Macbeth to kill the king by questioning his man hood

He has almost supped. Why have you left the chamber? || **LADY MACBETH ** He has almost finished dinner. Why did you leave the dining room? || Hath he asked for me ? || **MACBETH ** Has he asked for me ? || Know you not he has?       || **LADY MACBETH ** <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Don’t you know he has? || <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">He hath honored me of late, and I have bought <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Golden opinions from all sorts of people, <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Which would be worn now in their newest gloss, <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Not cast aside so soon. || **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">MACBETH ** <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">We can’t go on with this plan. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">The king has just honored me, and I have earned the good opinion of all sorts of people. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">I want to enjoy these honors while the feeling is fresh and not throw them away so soon. ||
 * || **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 13.5pt;">Original Text ** || **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 13.5pt;">Modern Text ** ||
 * || <span style="background: yellow; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Enter **LADY MACBETH** || **<span style="background: yellow; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">LADY MACBETH **<span style="background: yellow; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;"> enters. ||
 * || <span style="background: yellow; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">How now! What news? || <span style="background: yellow; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">What news do you have? ||
 * || **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">LADY MACBETH **
 * <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">30 || **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">MACBETH **
 * || **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">LADY MACBETH **
 * <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">35 || **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">MACBETH **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">We will proceed no further in this business.
 * <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">40

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">45 || **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">LADY MACBETH ** <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">Was the hope drunk <span style="font-family: 'Arial Unicode MS','sans-serif'; font-size: 10pt;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Wherein you dressed yourself? Hath it slept since? <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">And wakes it now, to look so green and pale <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">At what it did so freely? From this ti me <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Such I account thy love. Art thou afeard <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">To be the sa me in thine own act and valor <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">As thou art in desire? Wouldst thou have that <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Which thou esteem’st the orna me nt of life, <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">And live a coward in thine own esteem, <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Letting “I dare not” wait upon “I would, ” <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Like the poor cat i' th' adage? || **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">LADY MACBETH ** <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Were you drunk when you see me d so hopeful before? <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Have you gone to sleep and woken up green and pale in fear of this idea? <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">From now on this is what I’ll think of you r love. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Are you afraid to act the way you desire? <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Will you take the crown you want so badly, or will you live as a coward, always saying “I can’t” after you say “I want to”? <span style="background: lime; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">You <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">’re like the poor cat in the old story. || <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">Prithee, peace: <span style="font-family: 'Arial Unicode MS','sans-serif'; font-size: 10pt;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">I dare do all that may beco me a man; <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Who dares do more is none. || **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">MACBETH ** <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Please, stop! I dare to do only what is proper for a man to do. He who dares to do more is not a man at all. ||
 * || **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">MACBETH **
 * <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">50

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">55 || **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">LADY MACBETH ** <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">What beast was ’t, then, <span style="font-family: 'Arial Unicode MS','sans-serif'; font-size: 10pt;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">That made you break this enterprise to me ? <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">When you durst do it, then you were a man; <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">And to be more than what you were, you would <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Be so much more the man. Nor ti me nor place <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Did then adhere, and yet you would make both. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">They have made themselves, and that their fitness now <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Does unmake you. I have given suck, and know <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">How tender ’tis to love the babe that milks <span style="background: blue; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">me <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">. <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">I would, while it was smiling in my face, <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Have plucked my nipple from his boneless gums <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">And dashed the brains out, had I so sworn as <span style="background: lime; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">you <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Have done to this. || **<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">LADY MACBETH ** <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">If you weren’t a man, then what kind of animal were you when you first told me you wanted to do this? <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">When you dared to do it, that’s when you were a man. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">And if you go one step further by doing what you dared to do before, you ’ll be that much more the man. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">The ti me and place weren’t right before, but you would have gone ahead with the murder anyhow. <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">Now the ti <span style="background: blue; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">me <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;"> and place are just right, but they’re almost too good for you. <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">I have suckled a baby, and I know how sweet it is to love the baby at my breast. <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">But even as the baby was smiling up at <span style="background: blue; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">me <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">, I would have plucked my nipple out of its mouth and smashed its brains out against a wall if I had sworn to do that the sa <span style="background: blue; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">me <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;"> way <span style="background: lime; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">you <span style="background: fuchsia; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">have sworn to do this <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 10pt;">. ||

Introduction 2nd person pronoun 1st person plural Personal Anecdote

<span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 16pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">Christchurch earthquake <span style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt 51pt; tabstops: list 36.0pt; text-indent: -18pt;"> · [|**Aftershock was only a matter of time**] <span style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt 51pt; tabstops: list 36.0pt; text-indent: -18pt;"> · [|**I thought 'we are going to die'**] <span style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt 51pt; tabstops: list 36.0pt; text-indent: -18pt;"> · [|**Baby found in dead mother's arms**] <span style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt 51pt; tabstops: list 36.0pt; text-indent: -18pt;"> · [|**High resolution images of the devastation**] <span style="background: lime; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">THE death toll in the Christchurch earthquake stood at 65 last night, and there were fears it would exceed 200 as rescue teams in New Zealand's second largest city searched frantically all night for survivors. <span style="background: aqua; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">Up to 200 people were feared trapped in buildings that collapsed as an earthquake of magnitude 6.3 struck at lunchtime yesterday. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">Advertisement: Story continues below

//<span style="color: #333333; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">Photo: Iain McGregor / The Press // <span style="background: aqua; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">Bystanders described the city as a war zone, with dead bodies lying on streets, buildings demolished, vehicles flattened, roads ruptured, and water and silt - earthquake liquefaction - swamping the central city <span style="color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">The blacked out central city was under heavy security last night. About 400 army personnel are expected to be on duty today. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">As aftershocks struck, office workers jumped from fourth floors, abseiled down the side of collapsed office blocks or were rescued by cherry pickers while gas mains ruptured, and fires broke out, threatening to engulf the city centre.

<span style="background: #dedede; color: #333333; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">The historic Anglican cathedral ... "survived the Blitz" - until now. //Photo: AP// <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">Christchurch Hospital was unable to cope and the city ran out of ambulances. Private cars ferried people to medical help and many of the injured were taken to other towns. <span style="background: lime; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">The Prime Minister, John Key, confirmed the death toll at 65. The opposition Labour leader, Phil Goff, who also flew to the city, said police had told him that between 200 and 300 people might be dead <span style="background: aqua; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">The mayor of Christchurch, Bob Parker, said at least 100 people were trapped in about six sites and up to 200 people could be trapped across the city. I don't believe there will be thousands dead, but we're certainly talking dozens of people who are in peril and they may not be able to be saved.

<span style="background: white; display: block; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-outline-level: 4; text-align: center;"> **<span style="color: #666666; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; text-transform: uppercase;">Earthquake strikes Christchurch ** <span style="background: lime; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">Last night Sky News reported that rescuers had pulled 120 people alive from the rubble <span style="color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">A state of emergency was declared and the central business district evacuated. Power and gas were shut off to prevent fire. The city's water and sewerage was damaged and people were urged to conserve and boil water. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">Mr Key said extra police and army reinforcements had been brought in to help. I don't think we can go past the fact that we may well be witnessing New Zealand's darkest day, he said. **<span style="background: aqua; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">A comparison of recent major earthquakes to strike the world. The size of the circle indicates the comparative magnitude of the quake ****<span style="color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">. ** <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">The Australian Prime Minister, Julia Gillard, told Parliament she had spoken with Mr Key. I said very simply to him that anything we have got that they need we will get to them. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">The air force flew a NSW search and rescue team of 40 to New Zealand and more help is on the way. At least 8000 Australians are thought to be in the area. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">The earthquake hit at 12.51pm (10.51am Sydney time). <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">Another earthquake, measuring 7.1 on the Richter scale, struck Christchurch on September 4 and the region has since been shaken by aftershocks. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">Large parts of the city and suburbs to the south - including Lyttelton where the quake was centred at a depth of five kilometres - were hit. Wharves at Lyttelton Port, the region's main shipping terminal, suffered damage but reopened within hours. <span style="background: aqua; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">The earthquake caused the New Zealand dollar to drop by more than 1¢ against the US dollar. Economists believe the damage bill will exceed the $NZ6 billion cost in September <span style="color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">The manager of the data centre at the Institute of Geological and Nuclear Sciences, Kevin Fenaughty, said this earthquake caused more damage than the one in September because of its shallowness. ''It's a nightmare. A lot of people were just getting back on their feet after the original quake.'' <span style="background: yellow; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">There were fears for people trapped in offices <span style="color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;"> including the Canterbury Television building and the Pyne Gould Guinness building. A group of Japanese exchange students were reportedly among those trapped. <span style="background: yellow; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">The historic Anglican cathedral has been the city's centrepiece for 107 years <span style="color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt;">. When the September earthquake struck it stood firm, a symbol of endurance and hope. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">That time, much of the city was tucked up in bed, the CBD deserted. Not so yesterday. The CBD was on its lunch break. People were shopping, eating in offices or restaurants. A few were in the cathedral when the quake hit. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">The 63-metre cathedral spire rocked, swayed and fell. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">The dean, Peter Beck, could not confirm if any were under the rubble. <span style="background: white; color: black; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;">We just don't know if there were people underneath, so all we can do now is just pray. ** Emotive language ** ** Appeal ** ** Statistics ** <span style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt 51pt; tabstops: list 36.0pt; text-indent: -18pt;"> · ** In this article they use manly emotive language, appeal and statistics. This makes us think and also know how bad the natural disaster is. The writer uses appeal to make us help out any way we can like donations and make us feel what they’re feeling “ ** Bystanders described the city as a war zone, with dead bodies lying on streets, buildings demolished, vehicles flattened, roads ruptured, and water and silt - earthquake liquefaction - swamping the central city ”. Next technique is statistics this gives us the feel of how serious it is and how often these events happen. “ THE death toll in the Christchurch earthquake stood at 65 last night, and there were fears it would exceed 200 as rescue teams in New Zealand's second largest city searched frantically all night for survivors. ” Last is emotive language this makes us have the effect of what we feel and have a strong effect. “ The historic Anglican cathedral has been the city's centerpiece for 107 years .” This now makes us feel old historic buildings have been destroyed and that tourism would also drop.

How does Henry the 5th persuade his soldiers?

Henry V appeals to his soldiers by putting their manhood on line. If they do not fight and run they are a coward and have lost their manhood if they fight they will have their manhood and be respected and honoured.

In the sentence “we band of brothers” Henry V is putting himself at the same level as his soldier and “the fewer men, the greater share of honour” saying if you cower and run we will have more honour. With these two examples Henry V is already putting himself at the same level as his soldiers and giving them courage and faith. In the next example he is giving his soldiers the choice if you fight you will be honoured but if you don’t you are a coward and we will have greater honour.

Henry V uses wisdom is an idea to encourage his men and help them think we are not going to die and we will pass this information of this day to our family. This will make his men feel better about the battle and not think bad thoughts about the fight but think to the future. In this quote “ <span style="color: black; font-family: 'Helvetica','sans-serif'; font-size: 9.5pt;">This story shall the good man teach his son” giving the wisdom and the courage they had that day going up against odd not favouring them and still going into the fight. Henry V uses wisdom to help them think of good thoughts of going home and telling the children that the courage they had and that you should never give up.