Julian


 * Technique || Example || Effect ||
 * 2nd person pronoun || you are deciding what kind of world we will grow up in. || When she says you it makes people feel like there’ve done something wrong ||
 * Emotive language || In my anger || In my anger make people thing she is annoyed and had enough with what is happening ||
 * Rhetorical Question || If a child on the street who has nothing, is willing to share, why are we who have everything still so greedy? || The rhetorical question make people ask this question to themselves and realize what there actually doing ||

Severn Suzuki is a 12 year old girl that spoke to the UN about how we are destroying the enviroment. She used many persuasive techniques to convince the audience to change there ways.

Firstly Severn uses second person pronoun like "YOU are deciding what kind of worl we will grow up in", the use of the wor you makes the people of the UN feel like there've done somthing wrong.

Secondly, she uses Emotive language like when she says "In my anger". IN my anger makes people think she is annoyed, angry and has had enough of what is happening.

Finally Severn Suzuki uses Rhetorical Questions like "If a child on the street who has nothing, is willing to share, why are we who have everything still so greedy?". The rhetorical question makes people ask themselves this question and they realize what there actully doing.

In the ebd Severn Suzuki was able to pursuade the UN by useing all these techniques.

__ Macbeth  __ __ Macbeth response __ Lady Macbeth is married to Macbeth and Lady Macbeth is trying to persuade him to Kill King Duncan .To do this she uses many persuasive techniques. Firstly, she uses rhetorical questions like when she says ‘Have you gone to sleep and woken up green and pale in fear of this idea?’. The effect of the rhetorical questions in lady Macbeth’s speak is that they make Macbeth think about what he is doing and for him to keep his word. Secondly, 2nd person is used as a persuasive technique like when she says ‘You’ and by using 2nd person makes Macbeth feel like it’s all his fault and this persuades him to kill. Finally, Lady Macbeth uses Personal Anecdote to persuade her husband. ‘I have suckled a baby’ is one example of this during the argument. When she used personal Anecdote it helps to persuade her point to kill King Duncan. In conclusion Lady Macbeth was able to persuade Macbeth onto killing King Duncan by using many techniques like, Rhetorical Question, 2nd person and Personal Anecdote. __ New Zealand Earthquake  __


 * Technique ||  Example  ||  Effect  ||
 * Powerful adjectives ||    ‘Earthquake struck it stood firm, a symbol of endurance and hope’    ||  When the writer uses Powerful adjectives it gives emphasis of how bad the earth quake  ||
 * Facts ||    ‘Economists believe the damage bill will exceed the $NZ6 billion cost in September’    ||  The use of facts tells the reader that this actually happened and gives they some statistics  ||
 * Personification ||  ‘much of the city was tucked up in bed’  ||  The use of personification is to emphasise how powerful the 7.1 earthquake was.  ||

__ New Zealand Earthquake Response __ In the past few weeks New Zealand has experienced a 7.1 magnitude Earthquake that devastated the city of Christchurch and the writer of this article used persuasive techniques to tell people how bad it is. Firstly, the writer used Powerful Adjectives like ‘Earthquake struck it and it stood firm, a symbol of endurance and hope’. When the writer uses Powerful adjectives it gives emphasis of how bad the earth quake. Secondly, facts are used to tell people about the horror that has happen. ‘Economists believe the damage bill will exceed the $NZ6 billion cost in September’ this is one example of a fact. The use of facts tells the reader that this actually happened and gives them some statistics. Finally, the writer use personification like ‘much of the city was tucked up in bed’. The writer uses personification to emphasise how powerful the 7.1 earthquake was.

Julian, I know you were having trouble with your wiki so I have posted all the documents you sent me on to this wiki page. Moving forward you need to make sure you post necessary homework tasks onto the wiki. We may need to revise the difference between verbs and adjectives - 'struck' is a verb - it is a 'doing' word. An adjective is a 'describing word'. I look forward to seeing your Henry V analysis. Progress APA; 2 Miss A.